Video

I watched the "Humane Society Helps Adoption" story on komu.com. I really liked how the reporter was able to write for the video they had. For example, when she talked about needing wax for the floor, she showed footage of someone waxing a floor. 

I feel that some of these references would not be necessary if the story was text only. The ideas would need to be the same, but the wording would need to be much different. 

Overall, I think the story represented a good broadcast piece, but several changes needed to be made in order for it to be as just as strong text only piece.