The Clip I decided to critique is called Automated Restaurant ____ http://www.cnn.com/video/#/video/world/2008/06/16/pleitgen.germany.auto.restaurant.cnn
The Good
The story’s content is very interesting. Visually, the clip uses a variety of appealing B roll. However, the B roll looks redundant after a while.
The Ugly.
The intro to the story was staged! The clip’s first 9 seconds are not visually pleasing and do not properly show the significance of the story. I do not like the reporter’s decision to appear frequently throughout the piece.
J Stockdale
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