In my opinion, the story about the use of Adderall was written very well, having lots of information in a concise and efficient way. The story was also very good about using many sources, in turn giving different perspectives. This allows the audience to make up their own mind instead of being "told" what to think. The way the story flowed was something that caught my "ear" as well. The story transitioned cuts very fluidly and not once did I feel there was unnecessary sound. However, I also think that a little more sound could have been added, such as natural sound. I realize that with a story like this, it could be difficult to retrieve natural sound, but sometimes the lack of background noise was pretty obvious.